Today, we learned how writers create a clear line of reasoning by connecting a claim, evidence, commentary, and conclusion. Which part of building an argument is most challenging for you, and why?

Prompt: Today, we learned how writers create a clear line of reasoning by connecting a claim, evidence, commentary, and conclusion. Which part of building an argument is most challenging for you, and why?

Prompt Response: Evidence is the most challenging part of building an argument for me. I can usually think of something that I can use as evidence but have trouble putting it into words or finding a specific example. If I don't have many experiences or observations finding evidence can be difficult. I can think of readings but typically can't cite where they're from. I should probably read more and watch the news so I have recent readings I can remember.

Summary: In class today, we went over why our writable assignments got low scores and how we can change that.

Reflection: I can improve my writing by making a stronger conclusion that is not just a restatement of my claim.

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